Conclusions

Read page 39 in For Our Students

 

The conclusion is your last paragraph. It should accomplish two goals:
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As with the introduction, there are some techniques you should avoid:

  • Don't repeat the thesis (or any other part of the introduction) word-for-word. Remind the reader of your overall point, but use different wording.
  • Don't use cliches or overly common phrases.
  • Don't bring up new information. All important details should be in the body paragraphs.
  • Don't "announce" what you've written. Avoid phrases such as, "As I have shown in this essay..."


Here are your general rules to follow:

  • Reinforce the main idea of the essay. Make sure that your reader isn't lost in the details from the body paragraphs.
  • Connect your essay's topic to some larger idea. Explain to your readers why they should care about this topic.
  • Remember to write at least five sentences.


Methods for Creating Good Conclusions

  •  šMake a recommendation. What can the reader or someone else do about the issue? See page 104 for an example
  • šDiscuss the results. For example, if you write about a personal experience, let the reader know where you are now and/or what you learned. See page 43 for an example.

  • šMake a prediction. What will happen if things do or do not change? See page 101 for an example.

  • Offer a quotation/saying and reflect.  See page 55 for an example.